Spiderman with optic colors

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Spiderman with optic colors

Postby Seed » Thu Aug 14, 2003 3:36 am

Hi guys i know you won't like the line art ;)

Pencils: Anthony Ray Height
Colors: Optic colors (warlockss:bg ,me:character)
As you can probably see the character was done pretty rushed :) but the background is nice....equilibrate my crappy job *grin*

Oh well

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Postby Scott Johnson » Thu Aug 14, 2003 6:11 am

Actually, I have no problem with the line art. I kind of like it.
I like the fog in the foreground and the clouds and stuff in the back. I would darken the shadows that Spidey is casting on the wall. If the sunlight is bright enough to warrant those hot highlights, those shadows would be much more pronounced. I would also make his costume more red. Right now the color is a little too close to the color of the bricks. Since you are using a amore painted style for his environment you may want to add a little texture to the bricks so they aren't so slick. (note: this does not necessarily mean you should apply a filter.) Third, that grafitti is not convincing as paint...it looks more like someone hung a piece of green plastic on the wall.

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