Gladstone's (Update August 26, Page 3)

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Postby Dylan » Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:22 am

Preview pages for Savage Dragon #137, which I had the great pleasure of coloring.

For more information and possible release date, click here.

Crits most welcome.

art : Erik Larsen
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Re: Savage Dragon #137 (Update August 13, Page 3)

Postby Nathan » Wed Aug 13, 2008 7:29 am

Cool stuff! Good fit with Larsen -- he loves mostly flat colors. Wasn't Larsen doing all his own colors for a while? Are you getting credit for these colors (the credit box on the second page sure implies it's all Erik and Tom)? For the most part I love your color choices here (the skies and buildings especially remind me of Kelsey Shannon's stuff), but a couple things stick out. On the main splash, the bad guys jumping in the background don't even look like they're in the same picture. Are they ghosts or something? And the fat lady's close-up needs another tone, too, at least on her glasses. Oh, and I'm curious -- when you're trying to separate foreground elements, are you putting a color halftone on the shadow yourself, or is Erik actually cutting out Letraset screentones these days? Anyway, again, cool stuff!
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Re: Savage Dragon #137 (Update August 13, Page 3)

Postby sdowner » Wed Aug 13, 2008 8:23 am

I really like those halftone patterns. They're very distinctive. Are they a coloring choice or part of the lineart?

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Re: Savage Dragon #137 (Update August 13, Page 3)

Postby Nathan » Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:35 am

Huh! I'm at my studio now, and looking at this stuff again on a properly calibrated monitor, those crits I made before don't really bother me (well, the blue leaping guys still bother me a bit). Man I wish I had the balls to color every character in a panel flat yellow. I'm too scared Marvel would fire me, tho. They don't understand the awesome sometimes ...
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Re: Savage Dragon #137 (Update August 13, Page 3)

Postby michael-e-w » Wed Aug 13, 2008 10:07 am

Love this stuff. Post more! :rawk:
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Re: Savage Dragon #137 (Update August 13, Page 3)

Postby Laura » Wed Aug 13, 2008 10:15 am

michael-e-w wrote:Love this stuff. Post more! :rawk:


What he said!!

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Re: Savage Dragon #137 (Update August 13, Page 3)

Postby chrisc » Wed Aug 13, 2008 10:41 am

nice!
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Re: Savage Dragon #137 (Update August 13, Page 3)

Postby Dylan » Thu Aug 14, 2008 5:28 pm

Thanks people!

Nathan - Yeah Larsen was doing his own colors, he still does for the covers. He is playing catch up right now, trying out different colorist to get back on schedule. So this may be my only issue unfortunately haha My coloring doesn't seem to be what the old school SD fans are after. I'm credited, my name is probably spelt wrong like in Popgun, but I'm credited haha Just not in that little box. Thanks for the Kelsey comparison. I love his work and recently found out he loves my work, so thats cool! Looking at the splash page now, I see what you mean. I just wanted to push those guys back to pop out Dragon and Ange,l but I over did it. I think they're are a few cases where I did stuff like that unfortunately. Live and learn. In regards to the halftone, thats Erik, it along with the letter were already there.

Laura / Michael - I'll post more when I can. Pretty unlikely that I'll be able to post more SD pages though. All the other work I'm doing right now is me doing drawing and coloring, like the Cryptics pinup, so I might be able to show that when I have more done. Coloring wise I have Gladstone's pages and a Longshot story with Corey Lewis, which I'm stinging to show off haha Doing some more color work for some cats on a book Mark and I are editing too, so I may be able to show that stuff when I have more done. :]

Thanks again people!
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Re: Savage Dragon #137 (Update August 13, Page 3)

Postby CharlieKirchoff » Fri Aug 15, 2008 3:02 am

Dylan wrote: I just wanted to push those guys back to pop out Dragon and Ange,l but I over did it.


Well, visually it looks cool but it is a bit confusing storytelling wise and I think thats probably what Nathan was objecting too. All these pages pages are visually stunning. It maybe different than the usual Dragon stuff but I think some fans will consider it a treat.
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Postby Dylan » Tue Aug 26, 2008 8:00 pm

Thanks Charlie. I need to work on the right blend of storytelling and looking cool. I tend to favor the latter, which is probably not a good thing to do when it comes to comics haha I hope the Dragon fans like what I've done, I wouldn't mind coloring some more issues down the line. A little stability would be refreshing haha

Here are some Gladstone's School For World Conquerors pages. I love coloring these pages. It keeps getting better as it goes along as well. Which is good and bad as it has resulted in me jumping all over the place page wise haha Every time I get a new page its better then the next and I just want to get straight to it.

You can see some of my work in progress pages as well as uncolored pages here.

art : Armand Villavert
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Re: Gladstone's (Update August 26, Page 3)

Postby chrisc » Tue Aug 26, 2008 8:14 pm

yes. . .more sweetness!
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Re: Gladstone's (Update August 26, Page 3)

Postby Ryan » Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:43 am

I really like that first page. I'm not sure if the second page is too much of a transition between panels four and five. Are they both taking place in the same scene? Maybe something more like this to make the story flow better:

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I don't know, maybe not. Is it part of the visual punchline that the kid is ranting in raving in his own world, while the observer/grading person is completely outside of that world, emotionally speaking? If so, I think the juxtaposition works well.

Cool stuff, anyways.
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Re: Gladstone's (Update August 26, Page 3)

Postby CharlieKirchoff » Wed Aug 27, 2008 11:31 am

Ryan wrote:I really like that first page. I'm not sure if the second page is too much of a transition between panels four and five. Are they both taking place in the same scene? Maybe something more like this to make the story flow better:

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I don't know, maybe not. Is it part of the visual punchline that the kid is ranting in raving in his own world, while the observer/grading person is completely outside of that world, emotionally speaking? If so, I think the juxtaposition works well.

Cool stuff, anyways.


Judging from the pages on the link Dylan provided it looks like a scene change so it shouldn't have the orange in it.
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