Wolverine and Punisher

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Wolverine and Punisher

Postby Seed » Tue Aug 26, 2003 2:59 pm

Hey i know it's again just a pin-up -sorry :(

Pencils: Jon Sommariva
Colors: Optic Studio

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Enjoy :)

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Postby Laura » Wed Aug 27, 2003 6:42 am

Hey Seed,

Everything looks pretty good except for the top of Wolvy's left thigh (to our right). Something about it seems really flat. Maybe it's because the shadow line between the muscles on his thigh is too equal in distance from the rimlight, or maybe it's because the rimlight is so flat itself. Everything else has a nice rounded shape to it.

I think it would be cool if the walls were nasty and moldy and old-looking.

Punisher's shadows are inconsistent. The shadow from one leg is going up over Wolvy, and the other is going straight to the right. With the way they're standing, and the light source, Wolvy would pretty much be entirely in shadow. You could move the light source more toward the front, then throw Punisher's shadow across Wolvy and onto the back wall...that would work.

Good modeling. I think I'd like to see Punisher's knife be shinier, harder-edged highlights.

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Postby Seed » Wed Aug 27, 2003 6:51 am

Thanks for ya critics :)
Punisher + shadow was done by my teammate. I'll tell him :).
I agree about the flatness of the leg...my fault.

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