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Justice league pencils

Postby jmonyc » Tue Apr 04, 2006 6:16 pm

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Any comments would be appreciated
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Postby dib » Wed Apr 05, 2006 1:38 pm

It's a bit difficult to make out everything at that size. It makes them look blurry in addition to tiny.
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Postby jmonyc » Wed Apr 05, 2006 7:00 pm

click on the pic and it gets bigger
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Postby Scott Johnson » Wed Apr 05, 2006 7:44 pm

Still too small and blurry to critique.
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Postby Ryan » Wed Apr 05, 2006 8:59 pm

Are you redrawing pages from JLA/Planetary Terra Occulta? Interesting practicing method. Yeah, It's pretty impossible to give a critique with the files so small, but I can tell you to keep working on anatomy and perspective. And think about the angles of the some of the scenes, some of them are really harsh diagonals. Diagonals create energy and tension, but in a static scene like that it just seems odd (Like page 3, panel 3). Just keep practicing, and you'll keep improving!
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Postby jmonyc » Thu Apr 06, 2006 7:35 am

No I did these from a script i got from the internet.
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Postby Nathan » Thu Apr 06, 2006 11:54 am

jmonyc wrote:No I did these from a script i got from the internet.


Uh, is this script that you got from the Internet written by Warren Ellis and about an Elseworlds JLA who fight an Elseworlds Authority?
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