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Postby renato » Sun Mar 26, 2006 12:40 am

Ok, destroy me :P

My first finished page, just a practice with Michael Turner pencils (D-Tron inks? I dont remember) Maybe Jan or Feb / 2005:
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From Aug / 2005:
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Feb / 2006. No inks, I made grayscale first and then color flats:
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Extra! First draw on my new sketchbook:
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Postby jdkrause » Sun Mar 26, 2006 11:22 am

Very nice work. Looks good to me, but I'm sure those with (a lot) more experience will have something more useful to say. My only crit' is the strong red "border" at the top of the Witchblade sample. It's a little overbearing. Overall I like your work though.
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Postby sdowner » Sun Mar 26, 2006 10:39 pm

Hey! I think I gave you a crit on that Witchblade page on your DeviantArt site like 8 months ago. Small world.
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Postby splicer » Sun Mar 26, 2006 11:23 pm

You should make that hole thing thats sucking him in brighter and more vivid. Make it look intense. The rest of it looks good though, I like your textures. Something is seriously wrong with that girls eyes though, not sure if that's what you were going.
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Postby renato » Mon Mar 27, 2006 2:33 am

jdkrause: I like the red, but is right... maybe a darker tone?

sdowner: Really?... well, I dont know, I say bye to my Deviant account.

splicer: Hey, thanks! About the girl, whats wrong with her? I like it, but maybe I dont see something...
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Postby jdkrause » Mon Mar 27, 2006 5:57 am

Yeah, maybe sampling something that is about 3/4 the way down would be more appropriate? Not sure, it's just that with how bright it is now, that is the first thing my eye is drawn to. Still overall a nice piece though.
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Postby renato » Thu Apr 06, 2006 9:29 pm

More stuff, I`d like post more but Im so busy...

Just a faerie girlie for stickers (by the way, my best selling sticker):
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Practice:
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Pin-up for a friend character:
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Homework:
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