Spiderman vs. the Beastie Boys

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Spiderman vs. the Beastie Boys

Postby John Rauch » Thu Oct 21, 2004 9:23 am

Roger Cruz's pencils, my paints. Comments and crits are much appreciated. I know this one is a lot more vanilla than normal, but it'd been a long time since I used a Blue sky ad I was itching. Anyways, lemme have it.

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Postby Double D » Thu Oct 21, 2004 12:45 pm

Very nice colors, buts whats up with the tan windows. Also thats only one Beastie.
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Postby Jamie » Thu Oct 21, 2004 1:25 pm

Sweet, sweet vanilla...
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Postby chadf » Thu Oct 21, 2004 1:56 pm

So what'cha, what'cha, what'cha want?!

Nice as always, man. the only beef I have with it, really is a line-art problem...Spidey's right hip bone. The rendering is odd but highlighting it so hot like that really makes it look like the lower half of his abdomen has separated from him and is flying 2 or 3 feet in front of the upper half.

Like I said, the whole lower half is drawn pretty screwy (why is Peter's package so low and far back?:shock:) and your colors definitely bring it up to another level but that part is still weird.

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