"I STEAL YOUR TEETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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"I STEAL YOUR TEETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Postby B.Roman » Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:21 pm

I dont know if any of you guys remember Darkhorse had a contest called "Strip Search" a year or two back. Well I sumbmitted a story called "I'll steal your teeth!". The story really doesnt have a piont, basiclly its about a bunch of gremlin type dudes that kill the tooth fairy and jack her magic wand and crazy things happen. Please dont be too cruel, I did this like two years ago and the story telling is a bit awky! Well enjoy!

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Postby B.Roman » Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:25 pm

my bad this is page four, musta forgot it.
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Postby B.Roman » Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:27 pm

Man I mmessed it all up, the first post is page1, 2, 3, and 5. The second post is page 4. Sorry.
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Postby Reber » Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:39 pm

I fixed it for you. One too many / is all.


Love your style. Page 2 is a bit confusing though. After reading everything I figured out what was going on, but on the first attempt I was stuck on that page.
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Postby B.Roman » Sat Oct 02, 2004 12:37 am

Hey thx Reber.
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Postby Laura » Sat Oct 02, 2004 8:24 am

So cute!! In a sick and twisted nightmare-about-my-teeth-falling-out way!

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Postby Nathan » Sat Oct 02, 2004 8:32 am

Awesome! Can you post some hi-rez inks? I'd love to color this!

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Postby B.Roman » Sat Oct 02, 2004 9:45 am

Sure no prob, I'll have em up in a bit.
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Postby chadf » Sat Oct 02, 2004 12:25 pm

I'll never get tired of looking at this stuff.
Love it!

What did DH say?

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Postby SNAKEBITE » Sat Oct 02, 2004 1:29 pm

I love it! so cool...
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Postby B.Roman » Sat Oct 02, 2004 2:40 pm

Well the "strip Search" contest was on there website. They would choose four stories a month and show one story every week and people could vote on it. Well I lost for that month *sigh*
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Postby Jason Robinson » Sat Oct 02, 2004 6:27 pm

Funny stuff! Do you have any more artwork to show? Obviously, many of us love dark humor! :)
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Postby chadf » Sun Oct 03, 2004 4:08 am

B.Roman wrote:Well I lost for that month *sigh*


People are dumb.:P

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Postby B.Roman » Sun Oct 03, 2004 2:06 pm

looking back at this story, I can see why. The storytelling isnt tight and the art couldve been a little more loose. Dunno, I've always had mixed feelings about this stroy. I think I always wanted to kill the toothfairy, never did get that quater under my pillow.
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Postby Scrawl » Thu Oct 07, 2004 1:33 pm

i love the style and thought this hilarious, <grins toothlessly>
It is impossible to lick your elbow. And silly to try.
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