Spidey vs. Punisher sequentials!

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Spidey vs. Punisher sequentials!

Postby Rell » Fri Oct 01, 2004 9:08 pm

Hey guys! I'm new here. Just heard about this place today and decided to register. U dont have to go easy on me, I'm used to the harsh critiques BELIEVE ME!!! I'm still learning like you, although it'd be much easier if a certain someone returns your Bridgeman Book! Anyway here ya go!!

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9493627

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9637272

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9637349

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9637435

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9637594
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Postby B.Roman » Fri Oct 01, 2004 9:37 pm

great stuff, I like the clean look of the pages. I like the scenery you choosed, from the porfolios I've seen at cons people will avoid at all costs to draw buildings. Hell I avoid buildings! How long did it take you to draw each page?
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Postby Rell » Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:25 am

It took me a page a day. You have to be able to do a pg. a day in this biz. or you'll miss deadlines. So I work on my speed alot.
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Postby Zombie Dave McCaig » Sat Oct 02, 2004 11:22 am

I think this stuff is great.

I really strongly feel that you need to give your characters more mass though. I can tell you right now editors will be thinking the same thing.

Your punisher is about right, but spidey and everyone else have spindly necks (pgs 1,4,5). You should watch shoulder width too. The guy with the boomerang on his mask has shoulders that seem pretty narrow on page 1.

Spidey's neck really looks kind of feeble and unheroic. The cop on page 5 looks very weak as well.

Otherwise, I like very much.
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Postby Rell » Sat Oct 02, 2004 12:36 pm

Thanks Dave. I'll def. take that into consideration!
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