Composition feedback please!

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Composition feedback please!

Postby elm » Wed Aug 17, 2016 6:47 pm

Hi all,

Would love some feedback on the composition for this piece. This is just a rough compositional sketch but I'd really appreciate any suggestions on placement/etc.! It's eventually going to be a part of a book cover design. Not actually for a real book, just for my portfolio ;P
I'm having a particularly hard time framing the left side, I have the tree I added in after I scanned it but I'm not super sold on it...


(also the sun in the upper right isnt for the final it's just a lighting reminder for myself... haha.)

Anyway I'd love some feedback! I'll gladly return the favor if you wanna link me to your thread/ or anything you'd like a crit on!
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